【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之二：〉谜〉里男女对唱

lily_zl

这是比赛内容的另一首曲子，出自《谜》里男女对唱。
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) k: j* p0 _, B9 G4 k5 @歌词我附在后面。
The moonlight is shining brightly,
5 e/ H+ {. F0 l9 y; qMaking the sky glitter like gold,
1 g9 o* k' P& O% ?  IWhen I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness
The moon is shining brightly in my eyes
9 I5 Q: I& i4 J; t0 Q, _The sky is happy down to its soul
, w; k- F9 ^2 K# q5 ~; }With the moon kissing it every night
Seeing the sky content with its love
It fills my heart with worry         I fear our love will turn sour
8 ?. j, U8 |0 F: A7 H" @You needn’t fear anything
9 N( ]) S. s' {My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily
% G+ k1 {8 }5 v- `" F9 X6 ZEvery other word you utter is love
I really want to know just how much you love me
I love you I love you with all my heart
: z( E4 P2 O' B! B! P* |7 MNothing can compare to my love
Can it even fill up half the sky, P’?
The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love
I want so much to see inside your heart
I invite you to rip it out         To prove my love, I’m willing to die
I’m still filled with fear
4 N0 c! Q% C" o2 t; UYour glib answers are like 100 silver tongues
+ ^( m9 {! W5 @" X# q9 rI regret not dying
I only have one tongue           It’s nothing close to 100,000
With such a tongue as yours,
+ k. S1 X0 y, ^Your speech can’t even keep up with it
. q1 `% b5 Z: E; UIf I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things
+ U* Y3 D; S5 x1 i9 X4 e0 N8 BRambling on about a thousand words of love

jeffjma_jc

這可是TIK唱的歌呵。中文用詞可以比英文歌詞描繪得更好。大家快來啊。

lily_zl

呵呵，极富泰国风情的民歌，大家可以尝试着翻翻。等着你们的作品哟。

gougou

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/ f9 U* d  f9 L/ v<P>The moonlight is shining brightly, </P>
0 |+ N9 m: p4 t* C<P>月光闪亮 </P>
) q4 h6 \  ^3 o# Y' C! m; W<P>Making the sky glitter like gold, </P>
<P>使天空如金子般闪耀 </P>
4 B/ [1 q1 G! z3 Z+ Z5 Z* k+ y<P>When I gaze at it, my heart fills with happiness </P>
<P>当我凝视它,我满心欢喜 </P>
<P>The moon is shining brightly in my eyes</P>
<P>&nbsp;月亮在我眼中闪耀 </P>
<P>The sky is happy down to its soul </P>
<P>天空也陶醉了 </P>
<P>With the moon kissing it every night </P>
<P>月亮每晚亲吻它 </P>
2 H" t: u6 R  }* b<P>Seeing the sky content with its love </P>
- A1 `' c1 ~# \* Y1 A<P>看着天空满足于它的爱情</P>
6 y5 R4 \9 A. a% L( H4 N% g! B<P>&nbsp;It fills my heart with worry I fear our love will turn sour </P>
<P>我满怀忧愁,我害怕我们的爱变酸 </P>
<P>You needn’t fear anything </P>
2 |: Z4 }9 x6 E- [1 K$ w/ |<P>你无需担心</P>
1 W7 q5 g) B6 O+ |; j  a<P>&nbsp;My love is filled with happiness, loving you steadily</P>
<P>&nbsp;我们的爱情充满欢乐,爱你忠贞不渝</P>
<P>&nbsp;Every other word you utter is love</P>
<P>你说的每个字都是爱 </P>
9 ~6 B9 R7 R& [3 t2 K$ w" v<P>I really want to know just how much you love me</P>
<P>我想知道你爱我有多深 </P>
& q; _( L1 U- h& b<P>I love you I love you with all my heart </P>
<P>我爱你,爱你全心全意 </P>
" i& ^, q# k; D& ]+ u<P>Nothing can compare to my love</P>
<P>&nbsp;我的爱无与伦比 </P>
<P>Can it even fill up half the sky, P’? </P>
<P>能填满半个天空吗, P’? </P>
( B+ \, A  O1 ~( T, h<P>The whole sky couldn’t even reach half my love </P>
<P>整个天空不及我爱的一半</P>
& r/ ^4 |- K5 i- k9 Y' ?+ C/ F<P>&nbsp;I want so much to see inside your heart </P>
<P>我好想看穿你心</P>
<P>&nbsp;I invite you to rip it out </P>
<P>我请你剖开它 (我把心掏出来给你看)</P>
2 x" v/ z# o, P/ y<P>To prove my love, I’m willing to die</P>
4 X/ }& ?( F, D4 c9 @; ~<P>&nbsp;为证明我的爱,我乐意去死 </P>
<P>I’m still filled with fear </P>
<P>我仍满心恐惧 </P>
<P>Your glib answers are like 100 silver tongues </P>
' ^) \% z* S' A+ O4 F% C6 h: B# `<P>你油腔滑调的回答如同有100个银色的舌头(你的回答如舌灿莲花) </P>
<P>I regret not dying</P>
<P>&nbsp;我遗憾未死 </P>
<P>I only have one tongue </P>
<P>我只有一个舌头</P>
<P>&nbsp;It’s nothing close to 100,000</P>
1 V! s- G% r+ }1 O! U<P>它不是近于100,000 </P>
<P>With such a tongue as yours, </P>
" f; X6 `  \  D4 p# @( z<P>你有一个这样的舌头(你如此巧舌如簧) </P>
<P>Your speech can’t even keep up with it </P>
<P>你的话语跟不上它</P>
8 m0 n$ ?: e4 S( V/ e8 {# W<P>&nbsp;If I have a hundred, I will tell you 100,000 things </P>
% X9 V5 H0 B4 ]5 _7 K2 P3 P<P>如果我有100,我将告诉你100,000件事情 </P>
<P>Rambling on about a thousand words of love</P>
  ~# ~3 C8 x, ~: X( `+ D. b1 Z* t<P>&nbsp;围绕爱的千言万语</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 15:08 编辑 </I>]

gougou

楼主这里很难找啊，想投稿参加不易

bawu33

I invite you to rip it out

$ s' k0 X7 ?1 n% r1 u( k我请你剖开它

似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？

gougou

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I invite you to rip it out 我请你剖开它 似乎此话翻译有点奇怪，难道是女的要男的以死明志吗？我个人认为应该译为“请把心胸向我敞开”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-1 23:54</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542600&amp;ptid=14925" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<>对耶，不过意译又怕自己表达不准确。我想是“我把心掏出来给你看的意思”</P>