【08.11.01】 歌词翻译比赛曲目之一

lily_zl

这里是歌词翻译比赛的歌曲之一：《谜》的主题曲。


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6 }' ~5 X" O. n2 e6 P" g% Z
! w6 \; G3 ]1 W' a% f8 D我另将歌词附在此。
The only thing I’ve never revealed to you
- |, q/ e/ H8 N2 e; l" N9 [( cThat I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you
1 o8 i8 r1 O+ P: d' K$ L/ Q: I& @From the first moment we met,
I already loved you with all my heart
We meet and talk everyday,
But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart
7 [5 Q7 E  V; U3 x1 J/ wIf I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
* {% K" Y- K5 R1 O0 L% T3 s4 {5 \I would probably know how you feel
Love… just the word love
- c2 Y7 ^: e; a. Y  a/ j. uWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
+ \& I/ H* D+ [! D2 ?But I never did
One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
) v- I& q6 t. zIf today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
5 Z% I/ h& N7 i; g1 KEntrust my love within your heart
Love… just the word love
2 h. I' u; q7 X2 @, I/ [. yWhy is it so difficult to express?
I want to confess that I love you,
3 [; M5 u/ q  G- m% o8 m+ iBut I never did
$ g- B) v) I9 R- F. YOne day you’ll probably slip through my fingers
If today isn’t too late,
I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess
I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away
Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart
3 C3 N! N, x3 `" }Can I entrust it to you?
Entrust my love within your heart

[ 本帖最后由 lily_zl 于 2008-11-1 16:23 编辑 ]

oneaijia

我先领回去慢慢翻.

花雨

這首曲子真的很好聽啊！期待各位親們的中文翻譯啊！

joy.xq

嗯，这首歌曲很好听，可惜翻译水平有限啊~~~等待翻译的中文~~

gougou

<P>The only thing I’ve never revealed to you </P>
+ S% _) s) Q: a; ^. G3 E<P>我从未让你知晓的唯有一件事 </P>
* I; P. q9 Z2 N! l. x+ x<P>That I’ve concealed within my heart is that I love you </P>
8 ], e5 j4 I# a<P>深埋我心底—我爱你 </P>
' P2 }+ X" p! S, ^/ X* o3 ^<P>From the first moment we met, </P>
<P>从我们相遇的那一刻起 </P>
<P>I already loved you with all my heart </P>
<P>我已痴心爱上你 </P>
- @7 f; }7 L: Y2 b! I1 o<P>We meet and talk everyday, </P>
0 b/ z6 S' p4 J0 M% K+ D<P>我们每日相遇谈话 </P>
<P>But we’ve never discussed the matters of the heart </P>
<P>但我们从未谈论心事 </P>
<P>If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,</P>
' J  P+ }! b! K$ O  O<P>&nbsp;如果我能从你眼中读懂你心事（我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心）</P>
<P>&nbsp;I would probably know how you feel </P>
# n$ Q. R" K: k, \<P>也许我能了解你的感受</P>
<P>&nbsp;Love… just the word love</P>
2 B/ \7 r( ^  m5 {# M! b<P>&nbsp;爱,爱只一个字 </P>
8 e/ |4 b, a4 ~- E  z<P>Why is it so difficult to express? </P>
: L. Q, F4 k. Y<P>为何如此难以启齿 </P>
! |) a0 k5 K) k# K3 i& [; ]6 h<P>I want to confess that I love you, </P>
3 L0 `5 {/ n- d<P>我想说我爱你</P>
<P>&nbsp;But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会</P>
1 l' F5 x& z( `5 M  a7 e<P>&nbsp;One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers</P>
) I, S/ D0 W4 P& X( J<P>&nbsp;某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
4 m; }) {) g2 P7 ^/ L' B& Q<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late, </P>
: s: W" I3 t  J, L# e& k0 r* \' S3 Z8 V( j<P>如果今天不太晚 </P>
# w$ i8 Q) a6 o) |<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
7 X. R6 c9 R4 s0 v# g" v  A<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
- l0 V; ^5 Q* l4 O0 e: F% x7 Z9 m<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
$ j; [- p7 ]: D) k  d<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Love… just the word love </P>
<P>爱, 爱只一个字</P>
5 C  }" j; J( f) ]( f7 @5 g2 z<P>&nbsp;Why is it so difficult to express?</P>
<P>&nbsp;为何如此难以启齿</P>
* S4 Q, ]; b- Z$ Z" E<P>&nbsp;I want to confess that I love you, </P>
. B0 k! ^5 @. ?' e% _# ^3 O<P>我想说我爱你 </P>
<P>But I never did </P>
<P>但我不会 </P>
<P>One day you’ll probably slip through my fingers </P>
2 O1 B; E1 b# Z6 K) Y2 U4 B<P>某天你会从我指间划过(某天也许我会错失你)</P>
9 m$ f2 P8 a" f2 X3 p1 A. A+ |<P>&nbsp;If today isn’t too late,</P>
<P>&nbsp;如果今天不太晚 </P>
<P>I want to reveal something my heart has been waiting to confess </P>
6 x& c* i; }; ~, i* \<P>我期盼吐露心声 </P>
<P>I don’t want my love to turn into something that will just drift away </P>
<P>我不愿我的爱随风飘散 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
& X- P' V% ?( \' l% e$ @- Y<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗? </P>
$ d$ o: l# a) r: [6 C<P>Entrust my love within your heart </P>
: }. t$ P8 z/ F2 n. o<P>把我的爱交付你心 </P>
<P>Can I entrust it to you?</P>
6 E/ W, {* U# C/ z/ A; \4 D<P>&nbsp;我能把它交付给你吗?</P>
( T' l! b' h4 p1 A) v3 V! G' {<P>&nbsp;Entrust my love within your heart</P>
- [4 r$ w' f) j3 J( j9 k, _4 y) t<P>&nbsp;把我的爱交付你心</P>[<I> 本帖最后由 gougou 于 2008-11-18 11:39 编辑 </I>]

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
) N9 q, ]! r6 H6 |
2 j+ u* b7 R! O6 O7 v  w9 a 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心
3 H. M' L' t( t& {3 |
这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？

bawu33

If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul,
2 D) c2 H1 G* Y0 `6 X0 k
9 z3 i/ x; Q6 L1 e+ k$ D1 C这句话能否译为“如果我会读心术”？个人看法，仅供参考。

gougou

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If I gazed into your eyes and searched your soul, 我凝视你的眼,探寻你的心 这句话我想是否能译为“假如我能通过你的眼睛看穿你的真心”，不知你意下如何？ <FONT size=2><FONT color=#999999>bawu33 发表于 2008-12-2 00:10</FONT> <A href="http://www.chinatikfans.com/redirect.php?goto=findpost&amp;pid=542631&amp;ptid=14922" target=_blank><IMG alt="" src="http://www.chinatikfans.com/images/common/back.gif" border=0></A></FONT>

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<P>你的意见挺好的，我自己翻完，心里都打鼓，因为不懂音律，不知道是不是跟乐曲合拍</P>

小雅

亲已经翻译好了，我又得了便宜啊！！

gougou

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" G. y8 h& j/ i+ [/ k/ B. ^<P>早有人翻译好了，这是为大家交流举办的一个活动，你也来参加吧。</P>